Janice Bold
What Would you Paraphrase this As?
What would you paraphrase the part bracketed as --- particularly 'suddenly'? Also, could you change the last 'is' to 'was'? Thanks.
Our signatures, in that bold black ink, stood out against the white of the plate's china surface. I could see it from across the room --- I could see all of our names. Janice had displayed the plate in their home as if it were a piece of priceless artwork, which, [in all ways that suddenly counted], is exactly what it was. ('And You Know You Should Be Glad' by Bob Greene)
I've just realized there is only one 'is,' right before 'exactly.'
You could say "at its heart," "in essence," or "essentially."
Hope those help.
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